掃碼谘詢2026年新航道（dào）寒假班（bān）

January 4, 2026

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This table below shows percentages of satisfaction that First-Year students rated their modules in five aspects in 2014.

主體段分段方法：

主體（tǐ）1：Pre-Course info、Teaching、Tutor

主體2：Resource(print)、Resource(other)

開頭段

The table illustrates the proportions of first-year students who were satisfied with three subjects (Economics, Law and Commerce) across five aspects in 2014.

概述段

Overall, Commerceachieved the highest satisfaction levelsacross all five categories.Whilestudents in Economics and Commercewere most satisfied withteaching quality, Lawlagged behindin this area.

思（sī）路要點：

- Commerce三個（gè）方麵的好評率最高（gāo）

- Economics、Commerce在teaching的好評率最高，但Law在teaching的好評率最低

Body paragraph 1

It is clear thatthe three modulesdiffered significantly regardingteaching-related criteria. Commerceperformed exceptionally well, with 95% of students expressing satisfaction with pre-course information,compared withjust 59% for Economics.Likewise, 95% of the surveyed students were satisfied with teaching quality in Economics and Commerce, while Lawrecorded the lowest figureat just 62%.A similar pattern was observedfor tutoring sessions, where Commerce and Economicsscored above90%,compared with a noticeably lower figure forLaw (76%).

思路要點：Pre-Course info、Teaching、Tutor

- 這三個方麵，三個學科的滿意度比例差距較（jiào）大

- Pre-Course info：Commerce滿意（yì）度最高(95%)，但（dàn）Economics僅為59%

- Teaching：Economics、Commerce都為95%，Law仍然排（pái）最後一位(62%)

- Tutor：Commerce、economics滿意度都超過了90%，但law數據（jù）較低(72%)

Body paragraph 2

However,satisfaction with resources showed less significant variations, as the difference among the three subjects was under 20%. Commerce stilltook the lead, with over 80% giving positive feedback to both printed and other materials. Paper materials for economics were favored by 81% of the students,roughly 20% higher thanthe rate for other resources.Conversely, 70% of students expressed satisfaction with printed resources provided by the Department of Law, which wasslightly lower thanthe 80% recorded for other resources.

思路要點：Resource(print)、Resource(other)

- 這兩（liǎng）個（gè）方麵（miàn），三個學科滿意（yì）度差異不大，在20%以（yǐ）內

- Commerce：滿意度仍舊最高，兩個resource的滿意度都超過80%

- Economics：resource(print)滿意度為81%，鐵皮保溫施工比resource(other)高了約20%

- Law：resource(print)滿意（yì）度為70%，但resource(other)滿意度為80%

雅思（sī）小作文上分Tips

小作文看（kàn）著簡單，但寫（xiě）起來卻常常遇到這些問題：概括句總覺得空、不知道寫哪組對比；模仿範文也寫了不少，但（dàn）分數始終（zhōng）卡在6……

這類問題其實不是“基（jī）礎差（chà）”，而是缺少係（xì）統（tǒng）的表達框架+語（yǔ）言訓練。暑（shǔ）假是集中突破小作文表達力的黃金階段，新航道寫作課（kè）程會重點帶你：

讀圖（tú）、概括、分段，掌握各類（lèi）圖表寫作結構；

詞組句型反複練，解決“不會寫”或“太單薄”；

真題圖表逐句拆（chāi）解+精批，穩步提升語（yǔ）言準確（què）度。

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